<p>Hi, everyone! I was wondering if anyone would be willing to give me their input on my essays.</p>
<p>Thank you in advance. ^_^</p>
<p>I could look over it and I’ll try to lend some advice! want to look over mine? prompt 1 only</p>
<p>Sure! (: PM me yours and I will give you mine?</p>
<p>I could help you out. Send it over via PM. You’re welcome :)</p>
<p>I could take a look at it, too. PM me yours!</p>
<p>Hello!</p>
<p>The Personal statement is the most important portion of the UC Application process; you are given 1000 words to describe yourself and this is the portion of the application that sets YOU apart from the rest of the crowd. I have worked for admissions and records, for about 2 years at both UC Berkeley and UCLA while helping with UCI admissions on the side.</p>
<p>I help look over applications for UC Berkeley UCLA and UCI admissions. I have probably read over a thousand of these essays, and would love to help anyone who needs help revising their UC Essays feel free to message me </p>
<p>Thanks and good luck to all you prospective UC transfers!</p>
<p>^^^ don’t try so hard. </p>
<p>anyway, PM me i’ll gladly critique it.</p>
<p>Thank you so much, everyone! If you guys want me to read yours as well, just let me know. (:</p>
<p>Can someone PM me as well with their e-mails to read my essays? I’d greatly appreciate it.</p>
<p>Methinks UCadvise ^^^ is a scam. Don’t send him/her any of your writings.</p>
<p>who else won’t do the personal statement to the weekend before the submission deadline?</p>
<p>screw that crap. I’m doing mine now since I’m going to turn in my UC Application w/ the reception of my TAG decision. So much more stressful if held till the end!</p>
<p>PM me. For a better picture, what are your stats and intended major?</p>
<p>PM me, I’ll look over it</p>
<p>@john2: My stats? Lol I guess I’ll post them here then. And thank you so much! I will PM you~ ^__^</p>
<p>Major: Computer Science
GPA 4.0
IGETC: Will be complete by Spring '12
Major Prereqs: Will be complete by Spring '12 (or at least, all I CAN complete at my school)
Extracurriculars/Awards: Not too great, but not the worst-- part-time job, mostly clubs and stuff in high school, two scholarships, some art awards. Eee, nothing impressive -___-</p>
<p>@briceies: Don’t worry, I won’t! :D</p>
<p>@TaLLLuDWiG718: You can send me yours if you’d like. :)</p>
<p>@kittychen haha i was goona start soon, but with test and etc and finalizing my application this month been so hectic. I think i’ll start before since my counselors will take a look at it an give a 2 day turn around on how my essay is and another final revision since i went to one of the workships =). I’m excited whereever im going finally get to move up to 2 years of college xD.</p>
<p>I’m going to UCI / UCD and I was wondering if someone can read my personal statement and tell me what you think / be critical about it! my email is andrew.ludwig91 @ gmail . com the spaces are so that my email isn’t ********* anyways. email me and ill send you my personal statement. thanks 
I’ll give you more information about major, etc. when i email you my statement.</p>