<p>Hi! I've used this site for quite some time now, but I've never required any one on one help until now.</p>
<p>Can I please have my my two UC Personal statements read? I don't really need proofreading right now, I'm just very unsure of the direction my essays are going and if my message is conveyed. Any criticism is very helpful and any suggestions on how to fully use my topic/if my topics are inappropriate would be greatly appreciated!</p>