<p>Hi, well I new here to CC but I have browsed it for a while. I am getting ready to transfer out and I need help on my personal statement. It tells a story that is fresh in my mind and is very important to me but I feel like aI focus to much on the story and not enough on my self. Any one willing to help me out, sme tips on where I can but out andany other constructive critisism. Please let me know. Thanks! Im a PoliSc major btw.</p>
<p>Sorry for the gramme, my keyboard is getting old. I’ll pm anyone intrested in helping me out and I can check yours to if you would like.</p>