<p>Hi guys. I was just wondering if anyone would be willing to read my UC prompt 1/common app personal essay. I used the same essay for both. I'm kind of a borderline applicant at most of the schools I applied to so I'm wondering if this essay would help my chances. It's kind of personal and you probably wouldn't find someone writing about the same thing. Shoot me a PM if you're willing to help, thanks!</p>