UC prompt 1- does my idea fit the prompt?

<p>Describe the world you come from — for example, your family, community or school — and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>i plan to write about how my grandma almost had a heart attack, but then underwent surgery and had a piece of technology put into her (basically prevents blood from being blocked, im still not sure about the specifics but i will include the details in my essay when i find out) which basically saved her life. i then plan on writing about how this influenced my aspirations and that i want to be able to work in the modern technology field in the future so i can elevate the standard of living, etc. i also plan to write about how i have taken steps to achieve these aspirations, for example- joining certain clubs and doing volunteer work at the tech museum, etc.</p>

<p>would that be appropriate for this prompt? i have a feeling it could fit the other prompt more but i already have that prompt finished.</p>

<p>i think it fits the second prompt better</p>

<p>I agree, that’s a prompt 2 for ya.</p>