UC prompt #1 edit, please? :)

<p>Would anyone be willing to look over my UC prompt 1 and give me some quick pointers? It a little on the long side, but I had a lot to write about. </p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>I’ll take a look if you pm me :]</p>

<p>Yeah I’ll help you if you like. PM me and I’ll give you my critique.</p>