<p>So I used this as my common app essay, and I am not really sure if this fits the UC prompt #1. Any advice on how to make it fit would be appreciated. I'm applying to Berkeley and UCLA. I'll pm anyone who is willing to help. Thanks!</p>
<p>Can anyone?</p>
<p>just applied to ucla, willing to help</p>
<p>Thanks. I just sent you a pm</p>
<p>okay so for this UC prompt try not to make the whole essay about laundry. to to incorporate how this can represent your world as you come from much different variety, or (your attire being different from most) you yourself are different than most. try to stay away from saying your life is messy like your laundry or something. the world you come from is different and has different varieties which makes you who you are today. and what being different does to your dreams</p>