Uc prompt #1 need edit

College Essays
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<p>Hello,
It would be greatly appreciated if someone could help edit my personal statement.</p>

<p>The Prompt is: Describe the world you come from -- for example, your family, community or school -- and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

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<p>sure, send it over</p>

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<p>Sure. I can critique it. BTW, I’m a 2011 applicant myself.</p>

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<p>how do you post a thread? because i need help on mine too :(</p>