uc prompt 1-- need help

<p>I need someone to read my UC personal statement for prompt 1. I am confident about my essay for the second prompt but i cannot seem to put my ideas together for this one. If you are willing to read it and give me feedback, I will PM it to you. I am applying to UCSD, UCD, UCSB and possibly UCI. Thanks</p>

<p>i’d like to read your essay and give feedback.</p>

<p>I PMed it to you. Thanks</p>