UC Prompt #1 Need Professional Help

<p>i am truly stumped on the first prompt for UC's and i would really appreciate it if a few people would take some time to read my personal statement and revise/critique it.</p>

<p>thanks in advance.</p>

<p>please any help would be greatly appreciated, i need my essay revised before sunday!</p>

<p>bump~</p>

<p>PLEASE someone read and revise my essay!</p>

<p>I’ll help ya out man</p>

<p>Sure i sent mine in already</p>

<p>sure no prolem</p>

<p>I can read it if you need any more readers.</p>