<p>Any advice would really be appreciated.</p>
<p>Thank you.</p>
<p>i will if you critique mine (same prompt)</p>
<p>I'll have a look at it, if you'll let me. I live for college application essays.</p>
<p>sure whatever</p>
<p>i'll take a look, pm it over.</p>
<p>pm por favor</p>
<p>i'll give it a read, PM me</p>