Uc prompt 1

Can someone help me on my essay? I’m talking about my disabled brother in my essay. PM me if interested…

I’m too swamped to do anything more than a drive by.

But why is your essay about someone else? It’s supposed to be about YOU-- to give the schools “a reason to say yes.” Make sure that the focus of your essay is on YOU, not your brother.

I can try…? but I’m also just another student haha

I am talking about myself but he’s one of my factors

OK, great-- that means a whole different focus.

The best of luck to you!