UC Prompt #2 - Need Some Comments!

College Essays
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<p>Looking for anyone that I'll PM it to, wanna get some feedback on my essay to the 2nd UC prompt before I continue onto the first prompt.</p>

<p>Schools are UCB, UCLA, UCSD, UCI, and UCR!</p>

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<p>PM me and ill give some constructive criticism</p>

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<p>i will read it if you pm me</p>

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<p>pm and ill read it</p>

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<p>i’ll read it quickk</p>

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<p>I will read it :)</p>