UC Prompt #2: need some feedback!

[Mazorak]

<p>So I'm working on the essay, and I really need some feedback!
Comment if you feel like helping, I'll PM you.</p>

[Velocity1]

<p>I’d love to read it. PM me!</p>

[Kevinl0219]

<p>I’ll read your essay!</p>

[chemist1]

<p>ill read it</p>

[stong94]

<p>i’d love to read it. shoot me a pm.</p>