UC Promt #1 & 2 (Transfer) - Business major and Chinese-American identity

College Essays
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<p>Hello all! I'm a transfer student applying for UC Berkeley and I just finished writing both prompts, but have not edited my second response yet. Here are the questions and the word count I have, just in case:</p>

<p>Prompt #1 (transfer applicants) Word count: 509</p>

<p>What is your intended major? Discuss how your interest in the subject developed and describe any experience you have had in the field — such as volunteer work, internships and employment, participation in student organizations and activities — and what you have gained from your involvement.</p>

<p>Prompt #2 (all applicants) Word count: 533</p>

<p>Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?</p>

<p>If anyone would like to read and critique my essays, I'd be more than happy to email them! =)</p>

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<p>hello! I’d be happy to read/edit I am not applying to any of the UC’s :)</p>

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<p>sure thing, pm it. james</p>

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<p>PM me! I’ll be happy to read it</p>

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<p>Sorry for not responding! I decided to completely rewrite Prompt #2 to a completely different topic, and took longer than expected. I will PM my essay soon!</p>

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<p>Haha congratulations on finishing your essay. Sure I will read it.</p>

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<p>I’ll read it, I can help you with advice but I can’t help edit it for you.
I just send my ED package to Columbia, lets hope we both get lucky this year =D</p>

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<p>ill read it
send it over =)</p>