<p>Can anyone please proofread my first draft? I am looking more for a critique of content rather than mechanics/grammar/etc.</p>
<p>PM me. I’ll give it a read.</p>
<p>I’ll give yours a read if you want =)</p>
<p>Can anyone please proofread my first draft? I am looking more for a critique of content rather than mechanics/grammar/etc.</p>
<p>PM me. I’ll give it a read.</p>
<p>I’ll give yours a read if you want =)</p>