UC Transfer Prompt first paragraph.. please help

This is the transfer prompt for UCs. I am not even close to finished, but I am worried that my writing is giving no direction to answering the prompt so far. Do you have any advice? I have no real experience for electrical engineering… just many of my relatives studied it and I always accompanied my dad to work as a child.

Thank you!

What is your intended major? Discuss how your interest in the subject developed and describe any experience you have had in the field — such as volunteer work, internships and employment, participation in student organizations and activities — and what you have gained from your involvement.

                                                              A thousand Tiny Aliens

My father laid out a thousand tiny aliens on our kitchen table- or at least that’s what my 9 year old mind told me. He lifted them slowly, carefully inspecting each alien before moving on to the next specimen. It wasn’t until many years later that I realized these “tiny aliens” were actually power supplies. As an electrical engineer, my father was accustomed to dissecting the simple machines that broke in our household, but never without his “students”. He took every opportunity to teach my siblings and I how and why machines, objects, or forces work the way that they do. Whether he was opening a computer or connecting the basic telephone wires, my father taught me how to identify a problem and then go along the process of finding an effective and efficient solution.

Many of my relatives and family friends are electrical engineers, so I was always raised exposed to the field of study.

No, I think it’s pretty clear how your childhood experience and family background in Electrical Engineering has led to you developing an interest in the field. If you have gotten formal exposure to the field through your family (like maybe you worked with someone over the summer), you should also note how many hours. And if not, maybe just give an estimate, like “at least once a week, we’d have conversations about mechanics,” etc.

  • **nine-year-old**
  • my siblings and **me** how and why machines, objects, **and** forces work the way that they do.
  • go **about** the process

And you don’t have to describe experience in electrical engineering per se, if you don’t have much. Maybe you could talk about experiences that gave you important skills for the field, or your experience with anything STEM-related.

Thank you so much! I feel relieved knowing that I am not going off topic too much.

Thank you for your advice. I really appreciate it :slight_smile: