(UCB) Berkeley letter of appeal, requesting help

<p>I failed to accurately report my planned course work, which made me appear (on my application) ineligible for transfer by not satisfying the biological requirement for IGETC. However, I am satisfying this requirement for IGETC and have drafted a letter of appeal to address the mistake. I met with a councilor who advised me to clarify other aspects of my application in my letter of appeal. I fear that this letter may not be as concise as it should be, or it may address arbitrary discrepancies in my application... Would anyone take the time to review this for me?</p>

<p>I have a 3.7 GPA, am applying to a non impacted major and have met with a councilor who rates my personal statement 9 to 10 (out of ten).</p>

<p>Thank you,</p>

<p>Nicholas</p>

<p>sure, pm me and I will give you a second opinion and suggestions for tightening it up.</p>