UChicago essay, please!

[Mia4949]

Hey everyone,
Please help me checking my Why UChicago essay It is 530 words long and I would love it if someone could give me some feedback!

[Homeless2Princeton]

Message it to me

[Mia4949]

Thanks!!!

[JadeAriane]

I’ll read it!

[Zinhead]

I will read it.

[chipmunkiedoom]

I’ll read it! Can you read mine too?