<p>Hi Guys, I am desperately looking for some constructive criticism on my extended essay to UChicago, as it is , quite honestly my dream school. I do however feel that my essay seems to lack a certain "je ne sais quoi" that separate good essays from the memorable. If anyone is willing to have a look I will be incredibly grateful. </p>
<p>Thanks in advance and good luck to all other hopefuls!</p>
<p>PM me. I already submitted my application and would be happy to critique yours, if you really want to trust a stranger…haha; I’m good at critiquing though so if you want it, then send it over!</p>
<p>You can PM me, I am a current freshmen and would be glad to look at it. Also have you spelled your username wrong? It should say 2017RD, not 2016 right cause my class is 2016.</p>
<p>hit me a PM. I sent my EA application about 1 week ago. I would certainly be very happy to critique on yours…</p>
<p>you can PM me too. I have not submitted my application yet but I got everything ready. I will not do any big change to my application any more so you can trust me on this.</p>
<p>feel free to PM me!</p>
<p>PM me bro, I already submitted</p>
<p>If you want I’ll you give some input :D…mine’s already done so no worries</p>
<p>PM me I’ll be willing to look it over 
I already finished mine.</p>