UChicago Supplement Critique please?

<p>Preferably by someone who is a student or has already been admitted.</p>

<p>Sorry for the late reply, but i’d be happy to look over it if you want.</p>

<p>Ill look at it, pm it over</p>

<p>i’m applying there! i dont really mind if you want/don’t want to let me read yours. but which qns did you choose? i originally chose the road story, then changed to live the qns, then back to the road…</p>