UCLA Appeal (Help if you've ever successfully appealed to a school)

<p>I am ultimately all about having the most closure I can possibly get. I'm not afraid nor will I be devastated if my appeal doesn't succeed; but I'm going to put forth the time and effort to compose a well written appeal letter to see where it takes me. Here are some stats about myself.
Varsity Waterpolo 4 years (Team Captain)
Varsity Tennis 4 years
Administrator of several clubs including:
A Math tutoring club
A scholarship foundation club
2000 on SAT
700 Math II
670 Literature
4.33 UC GPA
3.92 UW
First Generation College attendee
...etc</p>

<p>I mainly need help with coming up with ideas to what new and compelling information may be used in the appeal. If you have ever had a successful appeal, what worked? I was in a serious accident several years ago before the beginning of High School, and my parents were worried that I may try to overextend myself, and in turn I didn't take as many AP courses as I probably should have. Besides that factor, I'd appreciate it if anyone else could give me ideas that have worked and that may apply to me, or in a universal manner, rather. I'm going to write the bulk of the letter tomorrow so if anyone could read through it sometime tomorrow or next week and give me pointers that would be greatly appreciated. I can PM you or you can PM me your email. (Whatever works!)</p>

<p>Thanks in advance =)</p>