UF essay - input please!

<p>Could someone please tell me how this is? I still need to clean it up a little before submitting it. It's for the university of florida.</p>

<p>In the space provided, please write a concise narrative in which you describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college experience or your contribution to the UF campus community. You may want to reflect on your ideas about student responsibility, academic integrity, campus citizenship or a call to service.</p>

<p>Please PM me if you could review/critique it. Thanks.</p>

<p>WHAT is PM,please?</p>

<p>ying - PM means private message :)</p>

<p>Anyone else willing to read my essay?</p>

<p>Sure i’ll read. I’m pretty familiar with UF admissions.</p>