<p>Please review this? I'm giving it to a teacher, but I'd like some second opinions. Here's the prompt:</p>
<p>In the space provided, please write a concise narrative in which you describe a meaningful event, experience or accomplishment in your life and how it will affect your college experience or your contribution to the UF campus community. You may want to reflect on your ideas about student responsibility, academic integrity, campus citizenship or a call to service.</p>
<p>Thanks so much! I'll PM it to you if you'd like to read. :)</p>
I’d really like some help.</p>