UF essay

I have started my essay for UF and I was wondering if anyone wants to read it and give me any feedback. it is not great but I could use all the help I can get. Please reply back if you would like to read it.

You’ve been asking a ton of un-related questions today. The earlier one about pre-calc following your D in trigonometry hasn’t been addressed. You should have a sit down w/your GC, tell him/her your college goals, review your HS curriculum to date, what you can do to improve your GPA and either take or re-take your SAT or ACTs. Someone there, locally, with a broader understanding of the entirety of your HS career, your desires, and the likely college choices before you — is best situated to give you multiple answers – not the shotgun approach you’re taking on this forum. Good luck to you.