<p>so i gave my essay to my /favorite/ teacher to read today, but she thought it was so horrible she couldnt say it directly =( omg now i'm freaking out because im out of town this weekend and i have to mail my app by monday! I guess my writing style is just different from everyone else's...</p>
<p>so could you please please be nice and read my essay and advise me on how to improve it? thank you so much!</p>
<p>I will read it for you. How does this happen? I don't know all the internet jargon. Let me know...</p>
<p>T.R.I.S. will PM or "private message" it to you. You will be sent an email notification so you can follow the link there, or you can click on the "Private Messages" hyperlink in the upper right hand corner of your screen under "Welcome, RHandscom". Hope this helps :)</p>
<p>You can PM it to me, I'd love to give you some feedback :)</p>
<p>I want to read it :)</p>
<p>i can help</p>
<p>I'll help..send it</p>
<p>ill giveit a read</p>
<p>i can read/give feedback for u. how did you know she thought it was horrible if she didnt say it directly? did she look angry?</p>
<p>i can read it</p>
<p>can i read it too?</p>
<p>I'll read it.</p>
<p>if you still need a reader, i'd be glad to help you out.</p>
<p>PM it ....</p>
<p>If you want any more advice, I will help!
Just PM me!!!</p>
<p>I know she thought it was horrible because she gave me "a look" and told me to go work on it some more. And she only edited half the essay =/ Another teacher thought the essay was good enough tho, so there's still hope =)</p>
<p>ill read it and tell u</p>
<p>send it to me. i'll be happy to take a look.</p>