UNC essay

Transfer Students
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<p>hi would someone please read my UNC-CH hill essay and tell me what you think. Please be harsh. The question was:
We tend to spend our time doing the things we know we do well—running because we’re good runners, or painting because we’re talented artists. Tell us about a time when you tried something for which you had no talent. How did it go?</p>

<p>thanks.</p>

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<p>I'll be happy to read your essay. After all, that's what helped me gain admission. They loved how much I flaunted them,lol. Just PM me if you would like.</p>

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<p>I'd be happy to offer a critique.</p>

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<p>Send to both of you. Thanks for reading it.</p>