UNF SCHOLARSHIP APP ESSAY HELP!

<p>Please help me out with my application. It's asking about the usual stuff.</p>

<p>Question: How has your family history, culture or environment influenced who you are?</p>

<p>How do I describe the changes I've made over the years or who I am exactly? I have a rough draft if anyone can help me with reading, critiquing, and/or helping me with where to put my paragraphs, etc. </p>

<p>I would really appreciate anyone's feedback!</p>

<p>You can PM me!</p>