Unique Common App Essay! Critique?

<p>Hello,</p>

<p>I was wondering if anyone would be interested in doing a last minute critique. I'm not sure if my essay is what colleges are looking for. Any help would be immensely appreciated!!</p>

<p>I would offer to help, but I recently finished my own personal statement and I don’t want to be psyched out. I just wanted to say though, that I’m glad someone else is a hardcore procrastinator like myself.</p>

<p>There are many of our kind in this college process! Haha.</p>

<p>I am willing to help! I’m freaking out editing mine as well haha. You can PM to me if you like.</p>

<p>Sure, I’ll read it. You can PM me it</p>