unique essay, i'd like some input

Applying to College
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<p>as the title suggests, i've refined my essay to the point of madness and would like some comments before i go any further. i'm totally willing to read all of yours in return, too. :)</p>

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<p>Sure, PM me it.</p>

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<p>I'll read it too. PM me.</p>

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<p>woah, awesome, so fast...anyone else?</p>

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<p>I'll go for it.</p>

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<p>I'll help also.</p>

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<p>Yup me too.</p>

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<p>ill take a shot</p>

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<p>can you PM it to me too? thanx :)</p>

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<p>I'm wiling to read it as well.</p>