<p>I made a thread about a week ago, but I didn't receive very much feedback. I'm sending in my app for ED and EA schools this weekend so I need my essay to be completely finished. </p>
<p>I'm looking for harsh critiques and constructive criticism. This essay needs to be pretty much amazing and I don't think it's there yet.</p>
<p>SO.... any takers?</p>
<p>i'm also a senior, so i don't know how comfortable u'll feel
look at my previus threads and see where i'm applying
if we have common universities, you don't need to pm me
but if u feel comfortable, go ahead and send it</p>
<p>I'll be your harsh/constructive critic, if you want; just PM me.</p>
<p>bump. (10 char)</p>
<p>I'll be more than happy to evaluate it. Just send me a PM.</p>
<p>I'd love to, send it over!</p>
<p>I'll read and critique it but I'll be probably be pretty harsh as I'm in a bad mood.</p>
<p>I'll do it. I'm harsh but I've been a copy editor in multiple school publications and am a writer myself so I can offer some real insight into how to improve your essay. Plus, I know three admissions officers (or previous ones) and have a (hopefully) good insight into what they are looking for. :)</p>
<p>i ll try reading it and give feedback quickly</p>
<p>send it over!</p>