Yes, I know ‘overcoming struggles’ is the most popular topic for application essays. But I hope mine will stand out because I moved to another country on my own and now I pay for my living. So, anyone can take a look at my essay?
I’ll read your essays too.
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highlighting the challenges you faced and how you overcame those challenges will be important when talking about the move. From what you’ve experienced, what have you learned to solidify your passion for your major. These are all things admissions officers are looking for when reading your college applications and personal statements.
For additional help, visit [UC</a> Personal Statement Guide & Example](<a href=“http://www.begincollege.com/uc-personal-statement-guide-example/]UC”>http://www.begincollege.com/uc-personal-statement-guide-example/) for sample personal statements.
Hope that helps.
I actually already wrote the essay:)
I am looking for someone to take it a look at it.
Please?
If I’m not too late, I wouldn’t mind 
send me your essay, I’d be very interested in reading it
What colleges did you apply to?