Unique situation

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Chicago ✅
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<p>I really want to attend University of Chicago, and after a visit and tour last week, I am going to apply EA next year. However, I have a complicated situation, and I hope the admissions officers will understand this. I have been living through child abuse for a decade, having a fatally ill father, and a mother suffering from a mental illness who has been through a pyschiatric ward twice, and maybe going on her third, plus having restrictions on the amount of time given for school work on the computer, so there have been many limitations for me throughout my life. I also want to stress in my essay that in my father's family, there have only been four college graduates in the entire family ever, including 3rd cousins ect, therefore going to college and becomming a college graduate is a very important thing for me. I also did have a cousin that attended University of Chicago a few years ago, however do to horrible circumstances, she just could not take the rigor of University of Chicago anymore and had to drop out. She is now living in the projects in the south. I want to stress to University of Chicago that I want to finnish what she had started. Although she could not finnish this school, I am determined to keep working until the end. As these are very difficult circumstances to have to have put up with throughout my life, I hope that the University of Chicago will understand this. Below, are some of my stats:
Gender: F</p>

<p>State: MA</p>

<p>Ethnicity: African American</p>

<p>GPA (unweighted)-3.4 </p>

<p>GPA (Weighted)- 4.17</p>

<p>SAT: Reading, 800
Math: 760
Writing: 800</p>

<p>Extra Curricular Activites: </p>

<p>9th, 10th, 11th, (and 12th for next year) member and violinst of the school orchestra
Copy editor of the school newspaper 10th grade
President and creator of my of high school STAND chapter (Students Taking Action Now: Darfur) 11th grade, and will continue till I graduate
Member of Tri-M Music Honor society- 11th grade, (and continue next year)</p>

<p>Interests in Volunteering: </p>

<p>One of the things that I am most passionate about is increasing the literacy rate for lower-income children across the nation. I am really passionate about volunteering, and am considering entering the Ameri-corps after college graduation for a year. I had tried to volunteer at non-profit organizations that were geared towards my interest in education and literacy, especially catering towards helping lower-income children in inner-cities. It is important for me to help these children, especially since I have a parent that grew up in a very low-income inner-city Boston neighborhood, and came out of the Boston public school system. I also still have family that live in poorer areas in inner-city boston, so it is close to my heart to help many of these disadvantaged children throughout the country.</p>

<p>Volunteer Work: (450 hours and counting)</p>

<p>Registration Coordinator for First Book, a non-profit organization based in D.C, which helps distribute free or reduced-priced books to lower income children across the nation. As a registration coordinator I had reached out to many different Title 1 schools, and after school programs that serve over 80% of low income children. To date, I have helped over 25 schools and after school programs including Washington D.C, New York City, and around the inner-city Boston area in Massachusetts, recieve free or reduced priced books. </p>

<p>Volunteer at an elementary school after-school program in my hometown, (11th grade and continue on in 12th grade)</p>

<p>Volunteer for Student Solutions, a non-profit organization based in North Carolina, which helps increase the literacy rate in children across America by providing literary and eduacational resources to schools in need. As a volunteer, I helped create databases of schools across the country that Student Solutions would reach out to to provide educational resources and materials to.</p>

<p>Volunteer for Nanubai, a non-profit organization based in India, which helps keep women and children in schools and India, and also helps increase the literacy rate among them. </p>

<p>Awards/Achievements:</p>

<p>Winner of First Book Registration Coordinator Challange</p>

<p>Presidents Volunteer Service Award- Gold</p>

<p>Congressional Award- Bronze Certificate</p>

<p>Congressional Award- Silver Certificate</p>

<p>Congressional Award- Gold Certificate </p>

<p>*The only problem is that I go to a really competitve high school where most people do well,( I have a class of about 360) I'm probably not going to be in the top ten percent of my class, bt maybe the top quarter, I'm not sure yet. Do you think I still might have a chance? </p>

<p>*I am also about to start my own non-profit organization called "Change for Changing Lives" that helps benefit low-income children in inner city schools and will raise money to help provide educational resources.</p>

<p>*Does it also help that my school is not diverse at all, and I'm one of the only African Americans at my school? Do colleges pay attention to that?</p>

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<p>Why did you wait until now to add that first paragraph? I’ve seen your chance threads before without it.</p>

<p>You look like a strong applicant to me.</p>

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<p>Besides spelling the word “finish” like “finnish” you’re good to go.</p>

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<p>You have a good record, you have strong story, you need to communicate it well. That is going to be the crux, you have hardships, how have you dealt with it. Apply to other schools also, if you are looking for FA.</p>

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<p>thanks so much</p>

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<p>You have a great shot, good luck!</p>

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<p>I had a very similar situation and i got in EA. Even with worse grades. You’ll be fine.</p>

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<p>I am sorry to hear that. You have spectacular chances for admission and I believe that your own personal situation will more than compensate for your unweighted GPA.</p>

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<p>Your Extra curriculars, volunteer work, weighted GPA, Awards, Achievements, activities, and SAT scores look great!</p>

<p>I’m in the same place rank wise, my school is also really competitive and so I highly doubt I’m in the top percentile, some of them have like 4.9 GPAs and they’re already taking all college courses because they’ve taken all our AP program has to offer, I have no idea how they do it LOL. </p>

<p>Best of luck, I hope you get accepted to your dream college and all goes well. :-)</p>

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<p>^^^^^ I did that. It really wasn’t that hard until I hit OChem. I think any person can do it if they have the right preparation (like working your butt off from the day you start HS). It just doesn’t look good to get bad grades in college courses, which is much easier to do than in HS courses.</p>

<p>Write an essay about what you’ve learned from your hardships and how its shaped you into who you are today. As long as it’s ~300-400 words, you will be able to use it in 80% of your applications (all of them if you use the additional info section). I did that, and I’ve used it in every single one of my applications. Just don’t come off as a victim or wallowing, and you’ll be a prime candidate considering the package you’ve presented.</p>

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<p>If you don’t get in, I will be really, really, really sincerely surprised. Like really surprised.
Good luck!</p>

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<p>thank you so much</p>

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<p>hey, I’m a current student at U of C, also from the Boston area…
I think you have a good chance, but I would say the opposite from the other people and say that you should mention the hardship you’ve been through in your common app, maybe as an essay of how you overcame it, but make sure not to make it sound like an excuse for something you think is lacking in the rest of your application. Because really, you have nothing that needs excusing. Don’t let anyone tell you your GPA is too low or you aren’t in the right class ranking. I went to Lincoln-Sudbury, idk if you know it but it’s a really good public school in the suburbs, also not very diverse…and like a full quarter of the kids end up going to the Ivy League. Anyway, I had a 3.6 gpa and worse sat scores than you and was only in the top quarter of my class and I got in. And if lots of people at your school go to good schools, U of C will take that into account and your grades will be worth more than those of someone from a school where they give out easy A’s. Don’t worry.</p>

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<p>thanks lareinexoxo, I do know of Lincoln-Sudbury, and it is nice to hear a response from someone who was from the boston area</p>

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<p>If I were a betting man, I’d say you’d get in.</p>