<p>Decision: Accepted </p>
<p>Objective:</p>
<p>SAT I (breakdown): 800 CR/720 M/740 WR (2260)
ACT (breakdown): N/A
SAT II: 700 World History, 750 Literature, 800 Chinese w/ Listening
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): School does not calculate GPA. Around a 3.8 though. Bad bad marks.
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A
AP (place score in parenthesis): European History (5), World History (5), Psychology (4), Comparative Government & Politics (5), Human Geography (5) – all self-studied.
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: Pre-calculus Math 12, Calculus 12, Geology 12, English 12, French 12, Social Justice 12, Peer Tutoring 12, Entrepreneurship 12
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): National AP Scholar Canada? Regional debate/speech awards? Not really. </p>
<p>Subjective:</p>
<p>Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):</p>
<p>Women’s Rights (9-12):</p>
<p>-Researcher and assistant writer for a book on girl empowerment.
-Co-founded a girls rights conference where we had speakers/workshops and around 100 delegates
-Public speaker for an international girls rights organization; founder of local branch for same organization (raised over 5k)
-Volunteer at Rape Relief Shelter (help babysit, edit resumes/cover letters, tutor English)</p>
<p>Model UN (8-12):</p>
<p>-Deputy SG of a national MUN conference 2015 (700 delegates)
-Chief of Staff of same national MUN conference 2014 (600 delegates)
-Director of Sponsorship for international MUN conference 2013 (500 delegates)
-Exec/coach of school conference; also dsg-internal for school conference
-Delegated and staffed over twenty conferences, many awards, spent a lot of time on this activity</p>
<p>Political stuff (8-12):</p>
<p>-Been in youth parliament since grade eight, held positions every year. Elected and serving as Premier.
-Worked for Provincial elections as an elections officer (paid)
-Volunteer and Youth Rep for a Federal level political party (cold-called during elections, attended rallies, help organize events)</p>
<p>City Involvement (11-12):</p>
<p>-On city youth action council, where I help plan a three day conference for youth
-On city youth leadership council, where I represent our city’s youth at special events etc</p>
<p>Debate/Speech (8-12):</p>
<p>-Top three in Regional champs; qualifier to Provincial Champs
-Finalist for largest debate champ in Canada (8th out of 74 teams)
-Top 4 for Provincial Law Cup
-2nd for District Speech Champs; qualifier to Provincial champs
-Coach/exec for school teams; helped organize school invitational tournaments</p>
<p>Non-profit (10-12):</p>
<p>-Started this registered non-profit organization in response to teacher strikes
-We organized educational conferences, hosted fundraisers (ie debate tournaments), set up tutoring programs at inner-city schools, and had outreach teams bring school supplies to developing nations </p>
<p>Job/Work Experience: Provincial Elections Officer, Tutoring, also waitress at Buffet Restaurant (forgot to put on app) </p>
<p>Volunteer/Community service: Vancouver Rape Relief Shelter, Federal Political Party</p>
<p>Summer Activities: Shad Valley, organizing MUN conferences, helping research for the book, studying SAT Math and APs</p>
<p>Essays: </p>
<p>Common App: 8.5/10 Everyone who read it really liked it. This essay was good and touching.
Supplement: 7/10 This one was meh. Generic, but okay I guess. Definitely could’ve showed my love and fit for Penn more. Really really regret this one.</p>
<p>Teacher Recommendation: All were very good and talked about my involvement in politics and international affairs.
Counselor Rec: Got my principal to write it. It was probably just so-so…she doesn’t know me that well.
Additional Rec: Got my English teacher (who has known me for four years) to write this. Talked about my involvement in politics as early as grade eight, and how I once did a presentation on the Syrian Revolution for an hour during class.
Interview: It was okay. More informative than evaluative.
Other</p>
<p>Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes. Canadian Citizen, but I don’t believe Penn is really need-blind.
Intended Major: International Relations
State (if domestic applicant): N/A
Country (if international applicant): Canada
School Type: Public. Some good students, a lot of bad students.
Ethnicity: Chinese
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: Rather not say here, but we’re well-off.
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): First generation college student. </p>
<p>Reflection</p>
<p>It was funny, because I filled this application out at the last day really sloppily but got in. Spent months on my UPenn application but got deferred…it really is a crapshoot ahha</p>