<p>Hey guys,
If anyone here is willing to read my 250 word University of Michigan Diversity supplement essay I would be more than greatful. You can give me any edits or critiques that you have because I'm a poor writer. SPEAK YOUR MIND. If you think the essay smells like bs let me know!</p>
<p>Just post here or send me a PM if yoru willing.</p>
<p>Thanks again</p>
<p>I’ll help you out, just PM it to me.</p>
<p>pmed it anyone else?</p>
<p>I’ll read it for you UVA! PS I loved your “good attitude” story about the ACT science section. I’m gonna try it because I feel like my negativity is half the problem! Do you have any other tips on that section? :)</p>
<p>sent it to ya</p>
<p>Elbeeen did a superb job reading my essay thanks ataon</p>
<p>I’ll take a look.</p>
<p>Sure, i’ll be happy to read it and have a revised copy sent back to you in a few days. :D</p>
<p>ill edit/give feedback</p>