ACCEPTED!!! (NHCM)
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2310 (740 CR, 770 W, 800 M) (one sitting, second sitting)
ACT (breakdown): N/A
TOEFL: 117 (30 L, 30 R, 28 S, 29 W)
SAT II: 770 M2, 760 BIO M, 750 CHEM
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): N/A
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A
AP (place score in parenthesis): AP Micro 4, AP Macro 5, AP Psychology 5 (self-studied)
IB (place score in parenthesis): English A Lit SL 6, Chinese A Lit 7, Maths SL 7, Chem HL 7, Bio HL 7, Eco HL 7.
Senior Year Course Load: English A Lit SL, Chinese A Lit SL, Maths SL, Chem HL, Bio HL, Eco HL; also, self-studying APUSH, AP Calculus BC, AP Statistics.
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): (ICAS) Mathematics Distinction Award, New Zealand Economics Competition Distinction Award (2 years in a row), Duke of Edinburgh’s Hillary Award – Silver Award, Bio Olympics National Entrance Examination – Bronze Award, MUN Diplomacy Competition – Second Place.
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Charity that promotes more communications between younger and older generation (founder, chairperson); student Council Officer; first violin in local orchestra for two years, concertmaster for one program; Chamber music club that present concert series at rest homes (founder and president); recreational tennis.
Job/Work Experience: Student researcher in university - calculate costs to implement a certain model of aged care.
Volunteer/Community service: Volunteer at rest home for three years; student instructor at music school for the less privileged kids.
Summer Activities: N/A
Essays (rating 1-10, details):
CommonApp: 8.5/10, talked about my experience with dementia patients. Ok to read, but quite cheesy. Shows my patience, resilience, and my caring nature, which are all essential characteristics for nurses.
PENN Essay: 9/10, I was alright, I explored in a lot of details the opportunities that come with PENN nursing. If anything could be improved, I would mention more about the interdisciplinary opportunities at PENN.
NHCM Essay: 9.5/10, my experiences with the charity kicks in, and I thought I explained the relationship between nursing and business pretty comprehensively.
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details):
Teacher Rec #1: (FERPA) Chem teacher; I ask a lot of questions in his class, he should write a pretty solid rec. 9/10
Teacher Rec #2: (FERPA) Eco teacher; solid. 9/10
Counselor Rec: Don’t know, but probably 9/10.
Additional Rec: Volunteer coordinator at the rest home I volunteer at. She knows everything I have done in terms of aged care. She wrote a very good rec, talking about my leadership and dedication in nursing. 10/10.
Interview: went really really well. This person graduated from Wharton some time ago. We clicked really well. She said that I was a perfect fit for the NHCM program.
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: No.
Intended Major: NHCM (Nursing and Healthcare Management).
State (if domestic applicant): N/A
Country (if international applicant): New Zealand.
School Type: Small private.
Ethnicity: Asian.
Gender: Female.
Income Bracket: N/A.
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): None.
Reflection
Strengths: My focus in both nursing and business linked very well to the NHCM; SAT 1 and TOEFL scores; essays.
Weaknesses: Lack of major awards, SAT 2, also, I have taken SL maths rather than HL maths for IB.
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: My strength
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected:
Accepted: PENN, Brown, Cornell, Rice (Distinguished Scholars), Emory College, UMich (Ross), BC, UCB, UCLA, UCSB, UCD (Provost’s Scholar), Carnegie Mellon.
Waitlisted: WUSL, Northwestern, Oxford College (Emory), Duke
Rejected: Columbia (ED), JHU, Harvard, Yale
General Comments:
I should genuinely say that I made a wrong decision applying for Columbia ED, and I am now so happy that I was rejected. It was only after the rejection that I realised that PENN has everything that I wanted Everything happens for a reason, and I am now very very excited to be part of PENN’s class of 2020. I will withdraw all other acceptances for PENN! It has been amazing to be part of the CC community. It is truly an honour to get to know all of you! See you all in America