<p>Wrote this essay rather quickly but I like the message. Short 250 word limit, so not too much room to include anecdotes/develop too complex ideas. If you want to read it i'll pm you. I'd like a response mainly on whether or not you think it is a good topic to write about/good idea, not that I should place a comma here and change the conjunction to a semicolon. It is still in its very early rough draft phases. </p>
<p>I will only let you read the essay if you are not applying to college this year. Sorry. </p>
<p>If you think the essay reads as intentionally trying to be unorthodox and depressing, then you might want to revise it. But if it happens to be a consequence of something important you’re trying to convey and doesn’t overshadow it, that’s another story.</p>
<p>Would you like to read it? I don’t think it’s depressing but it does have a sort of vibe to it throughout the middle. I believe it ends on a positive note however. The essay I think is unorthodox by prompt (Favorite word prompt)</p>