Up for another CommApp Essay?

[mallorylorena]

<p>Just looking for some last minute feedback. Thanks!</p>

[mallorylorena]

<p>It's only 660 words... not boring. I hope = )</p>

[jjchase24]

<p>ill help ya!
or try...haha</p>

<p>just pm it</p>

[Optimization]

<p>Sure. I will</p>

[mallorylorena]

<p>anyone else? will trade if you want</p>

[slewnior]

<p>sure...pm me.</p>

[jackfitz]

<p>ill take a look at it</p>

[spiffystars]

<p>I'll help. I've already sent mine in.</p>