UPenn Common App Essay. Anyone kind enough to read?

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Pennsylvania
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<p>Hello, would anyone be kind enough to read my common app essay (mostly targeted towards Ivy League schools)?</p>

<p>If you would like to, please post a simple comment and I will pm it to you shortly.</p>

<p>Thanks a bunch!</p>

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<p>I’ll do it.</p>

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<p>I’ll do it as well.</p>

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<p>i’ll do it</p>

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<p>I will! By the way, if this is different from <a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/cornell-university/1204047-cornell-common-app-essay-anyone-kind-enough-read.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/cornell-university/1204047-cornell-common-app-essay-anyone-kind-enough-read.html&lt;/a&gt;
PM your Cornell essay to me too! :)</p>

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<p>I’ll read it and present you with constructive criticism.</p>

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<p>sure, i’ll read it for you</p>

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<p>No problem. CC’s been a great help to me-- I’d love to provide some back.</p>

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<p>I’d love to :]</p>

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<p>i can read it</p>

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<p>I would love to :)</p>

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<p>yeah sure i would like to read it :)</p>

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<p>I’ll take a look at it if you like</p>

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<p>I’ll read it</p>

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<p>yeaa i will</p>

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<p>Everyone just wants ideas for themselves, don’t do it…</p>

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<p>It would be really weird if you ended up getting a call from the college saying they had already received that same essay…</p>

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<p>I’ll be more than happy to read it</p>

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<p>i can read it as well.</p>