<p>Can someone please read them? I need feedback. Harsh criticism is welcome. I'll read your essay if you read mine. Please nobody from UPenn :)</p>
<p>i’m applying to penn as well</p>
<p>i just did my penn communities essay</p>
<p>would you like to swap?</p>
<p>hey rastafarian, im also applying to penn and just finished drafting my penn commmunities essay, so i’d be willing to swap with you if you also read me essay. just PM me yours and ill PM you mine.</p>
<p>and lucy, same offer goes to you, even though i know you said you dont want people who are applying to penn to read your essay</p>
<p>same here yall. i just finished my pg. 217 essay and communities one. if anybody wants to swap, please PM me yours and i’ll so the same. Promise, no stealing :)</p>