UPenn Essay

<p>UPenn requires two essays. I wrote one really good one, and one that was just kinda okay. Anyone want to read my kinda okay one and tell me if it's "good enough?" The length is relatively short, which I'm also concerned about.</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>I'll read it! I sent my Penn app in last night.</p>

<p>I'll read it! I also sent my Penn app in last night</p>

<p>i'll do it</p>

<p>i will read it</p>

<p>I can read it.</p>

<p>BTW guys, I'm not looking for corrections. Too late for that right now. I just want to know if it's "good enough" so I can stop worrying about my chances at UPenn.</p>

<p>send it over then</p>

<p>After sending all those PM's, I've only received one response...</p>

<p>Yay that was from me!</p>

<p>i will read them. i am a current penn student</p>

<p>yea .... yea.</p>

<p>ill read, pm me</p>

<p>ill do it :-)</p>

<p>i ll read it</p>

<p>ill read it, i just sent my app like 2 days ago</p>

<p>I'll read it</p>

<p>send me one</p>

<p>I wanna read PM me</p>