upenn optional essay.

<p>it's the page 217 of 300 autobiography one. i need some feedback on it. tell me if you're interested.</p>

<p>and uh.. don't steal...</p>

<p>seriously no one? how bout if let you steal it?</p>

<p>i'll take a look, we did a similar one in english class</p>

<p>I'll take a look at it and give you some feedback.I'm working on the same one right now actually, it could be beneficial to both of us (and no I won't steal because two autobiographies can't be alike can they?). PM me</p>

<p>I'll give my two cents. PM me.</p>

<p>sure i'll read it ^^</p>

<p>ill critique it</p>

<p>ill comment on it 4 u</p>

<p>sure i'll take a look. seems like a hard topic</p>

<p>i'll take a look at it, i'm applying to uc's so no worries haha. pm it ova.</p>

<p>PM me. I feel its worth commenting</p>