UPenn, Yale, MIT, etc Main Essay (Need Feedback)

College Essays
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<p>Hey guys,</p>

<p>I revised my common app essay for the Ivies; though it's only a first draft without grammar check or touch ups, can someone please read it?</p>

<p>Please no one applying to mainly UPenn or Stanford. Yale and MIT 09'ers are welcome.</p>

<p>I'd appreciate some feedback ASAP.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

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<p>I'd be willing to read it. I'm applying to Yale 09'.</p>

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<p>I'd be happy to read it (09er but not applying to any of those schools)</p>

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<p>Anyone else?</p>

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<p>Thanks nd09, anyone else? I promise it's not boring! :)</p>

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<p>I'd like to read it. I'm '09 but I'm not applying to any of those schools.</p>

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<p>I'm applying to Yale '09 and I'd be happy to read your essay.
I'm pretty good at editing. :)</p>

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<p>I will read it. I am an 09er but im not applying to any of the ivies. Maybe you could read my common app essay and/or U of C EA essay while I read yours?</p>

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<p>Thanks guys! Anyone else?</p>

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<p>Send it over!!</p>

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<p>I'd be glad to take a look and offer feedback. I won't be applying to any of those 4, but doing Cornell ED. PM me :)</p>

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<p>@kMz, umm...you never replied to the last essay I sent you...</p>

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<p>I'll read them. I'm a editor on my school newspaper so I'll hopefully be able to help.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look for you.</p>

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<p>Ill take a look. Im not applying to UPenn or Stanford.</p>

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<p>i'll read it!</p>

<p>i'm focusing on yale. hehe</p>

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<p>I'm an MIT 09er, I'll take a look</p>

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<p>Sure, send it over. I'll graduate in 2010 anyway!</p>

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<p>I'll read it. PM it over. I'm not applying to any of those schools you mentioned</p>

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<p>I' ll look at it... I am not applying to any of those schools...</p>