<p>do you have any possible hooks? if not, it may be helpful to try to organize something in relation to one of your clubs or EC activities. Vague, I know, but to my knowledge, colleges like seeing someone who takes the initiative. Also, try to focus on what YOU can bring to penn, rather than why you like penn in the why penn essay. Chance me back if you have a few moments? thanks, and best of luck with Penn</p>