URGENT: applying early. Please critique my essay!

College Essays
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<p>I recently decided to apply early to my first-choice college, so I wrote my supplementary essay today...unfortunately, I am not happy with the quality. at all. Please,please, please help me improve the word-choice. Any opinions are welcome. The essay is barely a page long.</p>

<p>Thank you!</p>

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<p>bump. Please help D:</p>

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<p>sure! how much time until its due? pm it on over</p>

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<p>I’ll help.</p>

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<p>You can send it to me, too.</p>

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<p>I will help</p>

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<p>send it on over</p>