*Urgent* Can anyone read my essay?

College Essays
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<p>It needs some work. Be prepared to tear my essay apart.</p>

<p>This is my first post, so I don't think I can PM. I'll try to e-mail I guess.</p>

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<p>bumpbumpbu</p>

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<p>I’ll read through it you want–do you want me to send you my email?</p>

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<p>Yeah thanks.</p>

<p>You can just click on my username and send me one and I’ll just respond to it</p>

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<p>rover: CC censored third party websites. can you try resending?</p>

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<p>bumpbumpbu</p>

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<p>bumpbumpbu</p>

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<p>Yeah. Email it to me. testmylanguage at gmail dot com</p>

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<p>Send it to me.</p>