urgent common app help college essay

<p>ea deadline is right around the corner please help me out
I took a flight to China alone and I want to write about that.
I will try to show my independence. I work, clean, and do other stuff around the chose.</p>

<p>Should I include the fact that I am Fujianese, a type of Chinese that is looked down upon?
I also want to talk about the way I was raised.
what should i add or include? I think i have too broad themes.
Thanks for the help</p>

<p>If you add that you are Fujianese, make sure it serves a purpose in your essay. Also, make it clear that the Fujianese are looked down upon, definitely don’t make any assumptions that the adcom will know that.</p>