Is there anyone here who could please read my ‘Why Duke’ essay? If you are a current applicant, please do not reply.
Thank you! 
Just a tip, you may be better off posting elsewhere, as most of these folks are applying. You might get more responses in College Admissions?
Just be honest. They want to see that you have a genuine interest in the school, it’s community and learning.
There is a College Essay forum here. Try posting there.
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