URGENT need an essay critique

College Essays
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<p>really need some people to take a good look at my essay and give me concrete feedback not just tell me if it's good or bad. </p>

<p>if you're looking to steal this essay don't bother it's NOT GOOD. </p>

<p>just comment below and I will hit up your PM </p>

<p>please only comment if you're going to give me constructive criticism :)</p>

2

<p>Sure, I’ll read it. PM me.</p>

3

<p>I can look it over.</p>

4

<p>thanks so much I’ll send it now </p>

<p>anyone else??</p>

5

<p>If you would like to pm it to me I will read it.</p>

6

<p>ill read it</p>

7

<p>i would like to read it.</p>

8

<p>I’d love to read!</p>

9

<p>I’ll read :)</p>