URGENT: Please read my EA Common App Essay!

<p>Hey, you guys! I'd really appreciate a few critiques on my common app essay; it's on the fictional character prompt! I'd also be happy to swap if you want. My EA app is to Stanford, if you're curious, and my essay is 514 words! :) Thanks</p>

<p>stanford, eh? good luck! let’s trade essays, i’m looking for some feedback on mine too.</p>

<p>I’ll swap. :] I’m also looking for a reader for my Cornell essay, which is right now a complete and utter mess.</p>

<p>I can! but I’m a senior too so you may not want me… and I could swap with you but I only have a million fragments, i.e. only the first 1/4 of each…</p>

<p>Stanford, a formidable opponent. I’ll read.</p>

<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>I’m going to sleep, but I could definitely still use some more critiques, so if anyone else out there wants to, pleaseeee let me know! Thanks everyone who has read so far!</p>

<p>PM your essay over. I will take a look</p>

<p>Anyone else willing to read? I’ve made a few changes…and I’d like to submit soon.</p>

<p>I’d be willing to offer some critiques for you.</p>